Grey Story Good Concept: Boring Game
I think that the concept and Ideas that you have are great, story line is somewhat interesting, and the characters seem somewhat in depth. Now the problem comes with the actual game. You made it way to easy to navigate, there is no way to lose the game, and there was absolutely no challenge to the game. I would say that you made the graphics very fitting to the story, the controls where nice for the story, and the added elements made the game slightly more interesting but overall the game was just not exciting.
I would say that this is a game geared towards art and story, but not in the game. If you where to work on another: just improve on the difficulty. besides that great work I look forward to seeing more.